Insane-Sparrow's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Scene Creator!]

Cool

Hey, I like this one a lot more than your character creator. Maybe you could combine the two. If it's possible, a "save" option would be good.

7IsUnlucky responds:

okay

[Fishy: SE]

Fun!

Good script, I'm terrible at 1337 mode lol.

Nice work on a fun game. May I suggest being able to change backgrounds, or the colour of your fish? It gets boring to look at after a while. Still as fun as ever!!

7IsUnlucky responds:

Thanks!

[Newground$ Tutorial 2]

Too many of these...

Its clear you know a fair amount about Newgrounds and also have knowledge in Flash, which is good, but there are a lot of NG Tut's and I think we should just settle on one, instead of having many.

I'm not saying this is worthless, I'm saying you should use your skills for something really original. Whatever floats your boat, I don't mind, just put a lot of planning into it beforehand. I don't have much Flash to show, but I have done stacks of planning, and practicing with Flash, and should have something decent to release soon, I'm sure you can do the same. It's just a little bit of forethought.

Good luck with your future flashes!

HomerDough responds:

Thanks

[Stealth Hunter]

Cool

Very Metal Gear based, but I like it nonetheless.

[xbox emulator]

Daily 2nd?

I mean... I get it.. but its so short... and requires like... no effort... sorry, thats a thumbs down from me.

[Dress up south park]

Hmm alright :)

I like South Park, this got me interested. Your drawing in this is quite good, definately above Newgrounds average, like, loads of stuff makes it in, that is crap. Your drawing is not, well done.

Coding - Very simple, yet effective. Good ol' click and drag.

However!! The South Park theme would give you some points for sound, and I think a menu system for your clothing/heads/eyes would be great, cuz then you can include more of them, without the space becoming too crowded. Also, have rotating backgrounds, and perhaps a print button, it makes it much more interesting.

Overall, not too bad.

[The Blue Screen of Death!]

Well...

Okay, 2 years ago. Improved since then? Seriously for a first Flash attempt, you're a great drawer, no doubt about it, but the animation was verrrry jolty, and I couldn't really do much. Heh.

Also it was a bit pointless, there wasnt really any storyline, apart from this dude getting pissed at his computer. So even though you might be a good drawer, same rules apply to you, that apply to everyone else. Don't upload your first flash.

Keep it up, you've got a lot of potential.

Nakiannu responds:

Thanks. I guess you kind of have to have experienced a computer that crashes frequently to really get the point of it.
I didn't see anything in the rules about not uploading your first Flash.

[Line art]

Ooh, the fun and the crazyness

okay, something cool i discovered:

x: -
y: +

x: sin
y: cos

Initial Size: 20px
Initial Angle: 0
Size Inc: .75
Angle Inc: 89

Color: Anything goes
Rate: 33%

This is really cool, thanks for making it!!

[Tank Source V3.0]

Cool

Works for me :D

[StickRPG *Complete*]

FINALLY!!

The first time my friend and I played this we were frustrated when we realised we couldn't finish this.

Nice work!!